Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In
this
fast-moving world, technology has achieved a significant advances
in Correct the article-noun agreement
significant advances
a significant advance
ecommerce
. Correct your spelling
eCommerce
e-commerce
ecommerce
is a platform where we can buy our needed Correct your spelling
eCommerce
E-commerce
things
with the use of internet
. Add an article
the internet
This
essay will discuss about
the benefits and drawbacks of purchasing goods on the website or Remove the preposition
apply
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mobile
moblie
application using Correct your spelling
mobile
internet
.
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the internet
To begin
with, Internet has change
the whole world, where we can access Change the verb form
changed
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everything
everthing
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everything
in
our fingertips. In that shopping Change preposition
at
also
included, where we can purchase the required things
such
as books, mobile phones, laptop , booking ticket
and other Add an article
a ticket
the ticket
things
. Furthermore
, the major benefit is time saving
.Add a hyphen
time-saving
In addition
, by buying goods online, banks and ecommerce
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eCommerce
e-commerce
platform
are providing more coupons and discounts.We can take care of our health by sitting in our home and doing shopping.No need to go Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
to shop
for shopping so petrol is saved. Change the verb form
shopping
For instance
, In a recent survey, it is shown that, By the intoduction
of purchasing Correct your spelling
introduction
things
online, traffic and air pollution are reduced by 5% in india
.
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India
On the other hand
, Things
that we are buying online have disadvantages too. The major drawback is quality
of the product. We can see the quality of the Correct article usage
the quality
things
purchased in
online is poor, only after we got it. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, duplicate products
are added in between in online Correct your spelling
shopping
shoping
.To Correct your spelling
shopping
returen
or replace the product we want to call customer care and solve the issue itCorrect your spelling
return
a
hectic process and Add a missing verb
is a
take
time. Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
In addition
, in some cases, some of the products
do not have returen
or replacement policies but we do not like the product after it Correct your spelling
return
received
.Add a missing verb
is received
For example
, In recent
survey, it is shown that more than 10,000 cases are registered against Add an article
a recent
onilne
shopping for fake and duplicate Correct your spelling
online
products
in india
.
To conclude, By seeing the positive side of online shopping Change the capitalization
India
such
as saving time, petrol cost and some rest for health weights more than the negative side such
as fake/duplicate and poor quality of products
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