Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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fast-moving world, technology has achieved
a significant advances
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in
ecommerce
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eCommerce
e-commerce
.
ecommerce
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eCommerce
E-commerce
is a platform where we can buy our needed
things
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with the use of
internet
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the internet
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.
This
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essay will discuss
about
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the benefits and drawbacks of purchasing goods on the website or
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mobile
moblie
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mobile
application using
internet
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the internet
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.
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with, Internet has
change
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the whole world, where we can access
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everything
everthing
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everything
in
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at
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our fingertips. In that shopping
also
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included, where we can purchase the required
things
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such
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as books, mobile phones, laptop , booking
ticket
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a ticket
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and other
things
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.
Furthermore
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, the major benefit is
time saving
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, by buying goods online, banks and
ecommerce
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eCommerce
e-commerce
platform
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platforms
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are providing more coupons and discounts.We can take care of our health by sitting in our home and doing shopping.No need to go
to shop
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shopping
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for shopping so petrol is saved.
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, In a recent survey, it is shown that, By the
intoduction
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introduction
of purchasing
things
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online, traffic and air pollution are reduced by 5% in
india
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India
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.
On the other hand
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,
Things
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that we are buying online have disadvantages too. The major drawback is
quality
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the quality
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of the product. We can see the quality of the
things
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purchased
in
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apply
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online is poor, only after we got it.
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, duplicate
products
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are added in between in online
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shopping
shoping
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shopping
.To
returen
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return
or replace the product we want to call customer care and solve the issue it
a
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hectic process and
take
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takes
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time.
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, in some cases, some of the
products
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do not have
returen
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return
or replacement policies but we do not like the product after it
received
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is received
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, In
recent
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a recent
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survey, it is shown that more than 10,000 cases are registered against
onilne
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online
shopping for fake and duplicate
products
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in
india
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India
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. To conclude, By seeing the positive side of online shopping
such
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as saving time, petrol cost and some rest for health weights more than the negative side
such
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as fake/duplicate and poor quality of
products
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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