Nowadays, education is
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need for all children. In that education department, there are ones
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that
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should be
according to their
knowledge
.There are some others who think all
students
should be given
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knowledge
without any difference
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their academic
progress
.In my point of
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believe education must be delivered to all
students
togetherly without any discrimination.
To begin
with, when
students
are grouped they won'
t
experience sharing of
knowledge
with others.
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in the same
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skill
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,
progress
and other things.
Furthermore
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this
interaction between the
students
will become less so that they can'
t
explore many things.
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students
with good
progress
will grow more in academics but his
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affected.
On the other hand
, when
students
are gaining
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knowledge
all together in the same
they can explore the skills which they don'
t
know. To illustrate,
students
with low academic
progress
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students
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t
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knowledge
regarding that.
In addition
, due to
a good and healthy friendship will begin.
To sum up,
Students
are lacking their helping , sharing tendencies and
also
they are not exploring their
knowledge
with others due to
this
pupils should not be
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way and enhance their
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.