There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?
There is so much
noise
in many crowded places in big cities due to increasing
population Correct article usage
the increasing
day
by day
. There are many causes of this
issue . many things can be done to overcome this
solution.
To commence with , noise
pollution
has become a serious problem in
these days . it enhances Change preposition
apply
day
by day
due to advance
technology . Technology has changed across the globe . There are many types of Replace the word
advanced
pollution
in the big cities like water pollution
, air pollution
,industrial and noise
pollution
However
, noise
pollution
creates a major problem in cities as compared to villages . Firstly
, people use cars, bikes , Add a hyphen
three-wheeler
three wheeler
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three-wheeler
vehicle
on the roads and blow horns again and again and all these things create Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
pollution
and many older people are getting frustrated while hearing the big horns from the roads and it will lead to adversely impact on the hearing imparement
. Correct your spelling
impairment
Secondly
, if we Correct your spelling
go to
go into
gonto
some public places like in some religious place Correct your spelling
go
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children
childern
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children
overe
there makes too much Correct your spelling
over
noise
so we cannot put our whole attention towards our reciting prayers if we are doing in the temples. Thirdly
, this
problem can be solved out
by various methods , it is the duty of the authorities to implement proper rules and regulations so that everybody is followed and giving them fear Change preposition
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to give
them big Change the verb form
giving
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they Correct your spelling
fines if
fine if
broken
the rules. Wrong verb form
break
For instance
, foreign countries set proper rules to avoid noise
pollution
because noise
pollution
mainly spread from the vehicles while blowing the
horns on the roads . So the same thing applies everywhere in order to remove the Change the word
their
pollution
.
To sum up , I concluded that it is the merely
responsibility of all the individuals to avoid Change the adverb
mere
pollution
so that they live in the
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pollution-free
pollution free
environment and Add a hyphen
pollution-free
getting
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from
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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