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Increasingly, many young people are deciding to work or study in other countries. What are the causes of this phenomenon? Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

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Nowadays, it is
an
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inevitable that starting professional life far from a home becomes a trend. Affordable travelling and living cost makes it extremely hard to resist for
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youngsters to try something new and exciting. It has never been
easier
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 time to take advantage of moving out early and
people
 who already tried it, often
recommends
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 it. Metropolitan
cities
 tend to attract more young
people
 than smaller
cities
. They offer larger universities, more qualified and
higher paying
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 jobs as well as a wider variety of communities one could join. All these things combined propose to
people
 that they can live
better
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 and more balanced life. The side-effect of the movement of young
people
 to the other areas significantly affects their hometowns which are
loosing
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 talented and
courageos
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courageous
 teenagers to the more attractive places.
This
 migration
further
reduce
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 the chance of smaller
cities
 to compete with metropolitans in attracting investors and money
general
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. Young
people
 seeking new opportunities definitely earn a new set of skills by moving to more attractive areas. More attractive
cities
 for young
people
benefits
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 from their talent and
labor
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 capacities.
On the other hand
, a small percentage of young professionals
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 back to their hometown and
brings
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 new ideas, points of view and skillset to the place that needs
it
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. I think
this
 benefits all the parties.
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