Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In recent times, various methods are employed to promote learning. A fraction of teachers
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that children should learn how to play a particular musical device.
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strongly agree that acoustic instruments have their role to play in the education of young ones.
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a personalized input is required to play any acoustic device irrespective of its features.
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, the application of
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unique innate ability promotes coordination and helps the child in fields where reasoning is required.
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, statistics published by the Ministry of Education, Hertfordshire in
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Kingdom showed that youngsters of age three to five years who play at least one instrument assimilate faster after
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when taught mathematics than their counterparts in underdeveloped countries whose parents' do not prioritize it. The above informs that early exposure to musical classes improves memory.
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, improved social interaction
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are significant impacts of attending music tutorials.
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is owing to the exposure of pupils to classmates from different
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strengthening
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along with interaction with instructors.
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, a personal encounter that
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am aware of
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is my timid niece who plays the piano which prior to learning, passively expresses herself but was able to snap out courtesy
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classes with her peers and competitions at
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schools. To put together, it can be said that early childhood exposure to
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as well as helps the child express themselves outside an academic context. In conclusion, despite the fact that others may not value the importance of
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strongly agree that improved reasoning,
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that are socially inclined and
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is worthwhile.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educators
  • taught
  • play a musical instrument
  • benefits
  • cognitive skills
  • academic performance
  • physical coordination
  • motor skills
  • discipline
  • perseverance
  • express themselves
  • self-confidence
  • stress relief
  • relaxation
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • inclusivity
  • equal access
  • arts education
  • practical challenges
  • implementing
  • universal
  • balance
  • mandatory
  • academic subjects
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