Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent times, various methods are employed to promote learning. A fraction of teachers

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that children should learn how to play a particular musical device.

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strongly agree that acoustic instruments have their role to play in the education of young ones.

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with, enhanced creativity is one of the major reasons that encourages

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a personalized input is required to play any acoustic device irrespective of its features.

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unique innate ability promotes coordination and helps the child in fields where reasoning is required.

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, statistics published by the Ministry of Education, Hertfordshire in

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Kingdom showed that youngsters of age three to five years who play at least one instrument assimilate faster after

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when taught mathematics than their counterparts in underdeveloped countries whose parents' do not prioritize it. The above informs that early exposure to musical classes improves memory.

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, improved social interaction

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are significant impacts of attending music tutorials.

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is owing to the exposure of pupils to classmates from different

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along with interaction with instructors.

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am aware of

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is my timid niece who plays the piano which prior to learning, passively expresses herself but was able to snap out courtesy

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classes with her peers and competitions at

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schools. To put together, it can be said that early childhood exposure to

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phenomenon promotes good interpersonal

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as well as helps the child express themselves outside an academic context. In conclusion, despite the fact that others may not value the importance of

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strongly agree that improved reasoning,

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that are socially inclined and

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is worthwhile.