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Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #life #university #education
It is considered that having academic degrees from institutions is the best way to achieve goals and obtain more success,
while
 others argue that university diplomas are not important things to become successful. In my view, effective
educations
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education
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 in an educational institution
prepare
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 you for a better future and getting professional qualifications.
To begin
 with, applying
for
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to
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 prestigious establishments can assist citizens
to achieve
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in achieving
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 their ambitions and give them the best chances to improve their knowledge because it has well-known professors who have professional experience and can help the community to become successful.
For example
, when people
have gone
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 to an academy, they
have developed
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practical communication skills, time management and leadership which can influence their future lives. In my opinion, going to top universities
provide
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 students with comprehensive training that we cannot find in any place.
Consequently
, becoming more successful in life can result in effective teaching in universities.
On the other hand
, getting experience or doing something you like can help you become professional rather than having academic degrees. Sometimes individuals pursue their ambitions or learn some skills that they want, and these goals can persuade them to become successful.
For instance
, C. Ronaldo is one of the best soccer players in the world
that
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 does not have any academic degrees, and
just
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he has endless effort. In my view,
however
,
this
 statement can be accurate, the best way to become a successful person in your life is through high-level education in universities. In conclusion, getting into prestigious establishments is the best way that
can
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assist people to become professionals in their lives,
whereas
 some others believe that not more important than experiences and goals. In my opinion, academic education can cultivate practical skills that obtain more success in our lives.
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