A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work. In your letter Explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful Give details of when you would be available for work
To the director,
I am Nimal Pathirana
who
am living Correct pronoun usage
apply
Kandy
Change preposition
in Kandy
where
close to the museum. I have heard that you are looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid Correct word choice
which
work
. I would like to do some voluntary unpaid Use synonyms
work
at Use synonyms
museum
. Until Add an article
the museum
a museum
begin
my University studies, I can join Change the verb form
beginning
with
you. I wonder if you can give me Change preposition
apply
this
chance due to it makes me feel happy. Generally, I would like to Linking Words
voluntary
Add a missing verb
do voluntary
work
.
As well as, I have a lot of experience Use synonyms
for
voluntary works Change preposition
in
such
as I gave my voluntary support for Linking Words
public
library Correct article usage
the public
2019
and Change preposition
in 2019
city
council festival Correct article usage
the city
for
2021. I can handle any severe conditions and I can get any responsibilities. I prefer to Change preposition
in
work
as a team because I am Use synonyms
Add an article
a well
well known
person Add a hyphen
well-known
Change preposition
apply
as
how to Add the preposition
toas
Use synonyms
work
with others.
I am willing to give my support on afternoons due to I Wrong verb form
works
am occupy
with my university studies most of the day. Change the verb form
am occupied
Linking Words
Additionally
I can come Add a comma
,Additionally
weekends
after 2.00 p.m. because I am doing Change preposition
at weekends
a
tuition classes for Grade 11 students in the mornings.
I hope Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
your
immediate response Change preposition
for your
please
.
Yours sincerely
Nimal PathiranaAdd a comma
,please
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.