A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work. In your letter Explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful Give details of when you would be available for work
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The noun phrase museum seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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The noun phrase well known person seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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When used at the end of a sentence, the adverb please is usually preceded by a comma. Consider adding one.
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.