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letter writing to an English native speaker living in your area

#english #speaker #area
Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing with regards to the advert I saw in the local newspaper a few days ago about looking for someone to take care of your house for a short period. I am a part-time chef, with more than five years of work experience.I have assisted many homes with preparing different delicacies both local and intercontinental dishes and other house chores
such
 as cleaning, washing and trimming the gardens. I would love to do the same in your home. I am interested in doing
this
 job because not only will it add to my work experience,but I would
also
 improve the English language since we will both have to communicate with it which will help me later when I relocate to an English-speaking
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. I am ready to resume as soon as possible if I am considered for
this
 position.
Although
 I would only be available in the evenings after my classes on weekdays, I can come to work early in the morning on weekends. I look forward to receiving a favourable response. Yours sincerely, Akande Hajarat.

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