Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

The need for

land

for human beings is of the same importance as for

animals

. I disagree with the statement that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than for endangered

animals

. I think

this

way for two reasons, which I will explore in

this

essay. As an initial point, I would like to say that,

animals

play an important role in the

ecosystem

and to make a balance in nature, the

ecosystem

should always be balanced. In the

ecosystem

chain

, from the smallest creature to the biggest

animals

, everyone plays an important role, if anyone in the

chain

is missing

then

the whole system will get affected. There are many

animals

which are getting less in numbers day by day, some of them are Tiger, Panther, and many more, they play a significant role in balancing the

ecosystem

.

for example

, if one

species

is missing in the

ecosystem

chain

, just because of the non-availability of

land

for them,

then

species

coming just

next

to it will

also

get affected. the

animals

above in the

chain

can die, due to starvation,

therefore

, the above

next

species

will

also

get disappear slowly, in the same ,way the whole

chain

will lose its strength, and will give a negative effect on nature.

Subsequently

, if there is less

land

for

animals

,

then

they can reach anywhere for their survival and will affect the surroundings

accordingly

.

for example

, sometimes, we see some snakes near houses and in the buildings, which results in scares the people living in that area.

As a result

, people used to kill them for their safety. if there is enough

land

for those snakes to live

then

they may not appear in houses or in apartments. In conclusion, I feel that

,

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the necessity

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land

is

same

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the same

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for human beings and for

animals

, especially the endangered

species

.