Many people think that television is the best place to get your news while others believe there are better platforms. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt, that these days there are many ways to watch
TV
and listen to the latest news
. Some people
especially elderly people
prefer to watch TV
instead
of search
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searching
internet
or use
satellite to hear the latest Wrong verb form
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news
. Other people
including me strongly believe that other platforms are more helpful than TV
.
The main cause is, in
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age of technology and many things related to Correct your spelling
an
internet
, so there are many gadgets which we can use to and know about the latest Correct article usage
the internet
news
. For example
, in many countries
, people
have access to the internet
also
they are a member of many pages which are published the latest news
for free to public
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the public
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about
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news
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the news
Moreover
, they can be hearing about other countries
.
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, in some countries
which are more political than others, cyber space
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On the other hand
, some people
especially elderly people
claim that TV
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internet
and social media which published news
. Therefore
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internet
then
they prefer to keep on watch
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TV
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In conclusion, there are many platforms except TV
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people
insist that TV
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