Many people think that television is the best place to get your news while others believe there are better platforms. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt, that these days there are many ways to watch
TV
and listen to the latest
news
. Some
people
especially elderly
people
prefer to watch
TV
instead
of
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on the
internet
or
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satellite to hear the latest
news
. Other
people
including me strongly believe that other platforms are more helpful than
TV
. The main cause is,
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these days we are living
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age of technology and many things related to
internet
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, so there are many gadgets which we can use to and know about the latest
news
.
For example
, in many
countries
,
people
have access to the
internet
also
they are a member of many pages which are published the latest
news
for free to
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and they
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about
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news
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the news
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quickly.
Moreover
, they can be hearing about other
countries
.
In addition
, in some
countries
which are more political than others,
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is useful for aware
about
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the latest
news
.
For example
, in these
countries'
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most
of
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news
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getting
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or some channels do not tell the trust. So, some pages in
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released correct
news
and speak
clear
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to
public
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the public
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.
On the other hand
, some
people
especially elderly
people
claim that
TV
is more useful.
For example
, in the
past
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there were not any
internet
and social media which published
news
.
Therefore
,
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TV
and
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to
news
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the news
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were their habits.
Also
, many elderly
people
could not use
to
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new gadgets or search on the
internet
then
they prefer to keep on
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TV
. In conclusion, there are many platforms except
TV
for
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or
watch
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watching
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the latest
news
which
are
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published. But some
people
insist that
TV
is useful too. I strongly believe that other ways are beneficial because they
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correct and speak
clear
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, and we can be
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quickly.
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