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Band 2

Every country should produce enough of everything that the country needs so it should not rely on imports. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

#country #imports #support #position
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Nowadays people are more effective to buy others country product.
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 partially agree with
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 statement because of some specific reason. Generally speaking that most of the time citizen attract with other country culture like food clothes .
first
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 of all if people buy
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 product they will be attached that things.
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 like
countries
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 import varieties of clothes they can earn their own citizens money. On the other
side
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 all
countries
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 people indeed export
others
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 products cause
of
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they need other
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countries
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countries'
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 support.
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 , they can import some products
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from others
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Correct pronoun usage
other
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others
Correct quantifier usage
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 county
but
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I think it is not enough for them.all
countries
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 can not import all things behind the reason is lack of proper
machine
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machines
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lack
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and lack
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 of
intelligence
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 employe. In conclusion,

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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