Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Due to the
internet and technology which are played Change preposition
The
the
vital role in Correct article usage
a
human's
life. Online Change noun form
human
education
is becoming trends
. Some believe that e-learning has positives feature, Fix the agreement mistake
trend
this
will disappear onsite instruction soon in the future. While others claim that face-to-face education
is irreplaceable. In the following paragraphs, Both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail, before a conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, E-learning became a choice for teenagers and adults also
which is easier and cheaper compared to institution
or Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
campus
. If Fix the agreement mistake
campuses
everybody
able to learn at home, Add a verb
iseverybody
waseverybody
this
will be benefits
for Replace the word
beneficial
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the learner
learner
. Fix the agreement mistake
learners
For example
, Since the COVID-19 pandemic, Students have to studying
online so that they will have more Change the verb form
study
time
and they do not have to passenger to the school. Moreover
, Online courses offer flexibility, learners can set the time
by themselves for online education
which is a great benefit for a person who works at a Add a hyphen
part-time
part
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part-time
time
job.
On the other hand
, Online education
is ineffectively especially
for Add the comma(s)
,especially
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children
childrens
. The internet is the most essential in society throughout Correct your spelling
children
this
time
. Many children are not likely to study. This
can cause significantly
issues. Change the adverb
significant
For example
, Online classes happened when the pandemic is spread. Kids who studying
at home Change the form of the verb
study
and
do not have an instructor hounding them on Correct word choice
apply
lesson
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lessons
having
lots of Wrong verb form
have
distraction
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distractions
such
as,
playing games, watching movies and scrolling Remove the comma
apply
the
mobile phone. Change the word
their
Hence
, The more they irresponsible
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are irresponsible
, the
more they will Add a missing verb
are, the
dropped
out Change the verb form
drop
be dropped
from
the Change preposition
of
education
system.
In conclusion, Online
scheme has both positive and negative aspects. In my opinion, I strongly stand for the latter view, Correct article usage
the Online
Although
online
class is more comfortable Add an article
the online
but
learning in class with the professor is more beneficial for everyone and Remove the conjunction
apply
this
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