Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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. Some believe that e-learning has positives feature,

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will disappear onsite instruction soon in the future. While others claim that face-to-face

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is irreplaceable. In the following paragraphs, Both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail, before a conclusion is reached. On the one hand, E-learning became a choice for teenagers and adults

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which is easier and cheaper compared to

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able to learn at home,

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, Since the COVID-19 pandemic, Students have to

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online so that they will have more

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and they do not have to passenger to the school.

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, Online courses offer flexibility, learners can set the

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which is a great benefit for a person who works at a

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is ineffectively

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. The internet is the most essential in society throughout

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. Many children are not likely to study.

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, Online classes happened when the pandemic is spread. Kids who

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at home

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do not have an instructor hounding them on

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playing games, watching movies and scrolling

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mobile phone.

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system. In conclusion,

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scheme has both positive and negative aspects. In my opinion, I strongly stand for the latter view,

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class is more comfortable

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learning in class with the professor is more beneficial for everyone and

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cannot be replaced.