Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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internet and technology which are played
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vital role in
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life. Online
education
is becoming
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. Some believe that e-learning has positives feature,
this
will disappear onsite instruction soon in the future. While others claim that face-to-face
education
is irreplaceable. In the following paragraphs, Both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail, before a conclusion is reached. On the one hand, E-learning became a choice for teenagers and adults
also
which is easier and cheaper compared to
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or
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. If
everybody
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able to learn at home,
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for
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learner
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.
For example
, Since the COVID-19 pandemic, Students have to
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online so that they will have more
time
and they do not have to passenger to the school.
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, Online courses offer flexibility, learners can set the
time
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education
which is a great benefit for a person who works at a
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part
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job.
On the other hand
, Online
education
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for
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children
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. The internet is the most essential in society throughout
this
time
. Many children are not likely to study.
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can cause
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issues.
For example
, Online classes happened when the pandemic is spread. Kids who
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at home
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do not have an instructor hounding them on
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lots of
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such
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playing games, watching movies and scrolling
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mobile phone.
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, the
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more they will
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out
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the
education
system. In conclusion,
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scheme has both positive and negative aspects. In my opinion, I strongly stand for the latter view,
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class is more comfortable
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learning in class with the professor is more beneficial for everyone and
this
cannot be replaced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-Learning
  • face-to-face education
  • remote learning
  • virtual classroom
  • webinar
  • digital platform
  • self-paced learning
  • interactive learning
  • course accessibility
  • academic networking
  • pedagogy
  • synchronous/asynchronous sessions
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • edtech (educational technology)
  • holistic development
  • practical skills
  • collaborative learning
  • digital divide
  • curriculum adaptation
  • technological literacy
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