Many people nowadays don’t feel safe either when they are at home or go out. What are the reasons? What can we do to solve this problem?
It is commonly considered that we live in an unsafety generation, and a lot of
people
think that they may suffer even when they stay home. In my opinion, I believe that there are some reasons which cause this
kind of feeling, and have ways to cope with them, too.
Firstly
, because the internet and mobile devices are becoming increasingly essential and used in many places, many people
have started to worry that their privacy will be leaked and other crimes online. In social media, for instance
, during the past few years, a massive number of users’ identifications have been stolen and sold to criminal groups by hackers. Although
these social platforms and applications make people
’s lives more convenient because they can know everything they just need to search online, social media also
drug people
into dangerous situations even if people
never leave their homes. Moreover
, more and more people
use
their phones when they walk on the street, and this
activity also
puts people
in danger due to incaution.
However
, we can use
some effective ways to solve these problems. For example
, people
can install the anti-hacked software on their computers and smartphones and don’t click some stranger links with which they are unfamiliar. Additionally
, people
should notice and care about their surroundings when they go out and do not use
their mobiles when they are walking or waiting to cross the roads.
In conclusion, because of technology, people
may not be safe even if only surfing the internet, but people
still can change their habits and use
some software to protect themselves from danger.Submitted by tcc55662005 on
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