Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern world, families with both working parents are becoming a norm, so the responsibility of child-rearing often falls on the shoulders of

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or

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. Many people think the

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and the professionally trained personnel that

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offer are the best

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others prefer the nurturing nature of

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. I assert that the latter is the better choice. On the one hand,

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are professional in taking

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of

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and can provide them with a suitable environment for their development. These

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centers

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are usually equipped with

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as playgrounds, labs and gardens that allow their young clients to learn about the natural world

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engage in a range of physical and intellectual activities. The exposure to principle knowledge and activities could help the

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to develop their

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and physical well-being thereby helping them prepare for the world.

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they partake in said activities, their essential needs are taken

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of by professional caregivers who are experts in child psychology and various pedagogical methods. By and large, the

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and

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are often thought to be better compared to amenities at home.

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, I would argue that it is better to let a child be taken

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of by their

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. The key objective of child-rearing is to assure the

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of a place of total safety to grow and learn.

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could usually provide undivided attention

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their grandchildren.

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accommodating the essential needs,

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could

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watch out for potentially dangerous situations in which the

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may injure themselves. In contrast, the sheer

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of

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at a

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makes it difficult for

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caregivers to monitor every child at any given time.

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choice is often more cost-effective as parents can avoid incurring extra fees often required by the

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, which can be suitable for households with a restricted budget.

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lacking certain

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and

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, staying with one’s

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is the better option. In conclusion,

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are best at providing

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and

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that, in theory, would allow the

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to develop to their full

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whereas

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they cannot match the safety at home or the individual

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could accommodate. For these reasons, I think that

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are better caretakers for

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preschool children

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children

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.