Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him / her other news

Dear Sam, How are you doing? Great to hear that you find a nice apartment

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week. I assume that you will be busy with packing soon. If you recall, I told you I am looking forward to shifting my career path from traditional industries to the fine technology

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, in which I am interested

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a few years. I have tried my best to find all possible opportunities to go to the

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as it is quite a competitive market as many people are interested in

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, I got an offer from XXX company

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week. I will start to work with my new company in October as I need to give one month's notice to Human Resource Department. I will be one of the team leaders in an accounting department in the

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. As far as I know, I need to provide training courses to my teammates, plan to have a weekly meeting with senior management, keeping track of the accounting standard in the

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. I do believe that these opportunities can enhance my accounting knowledge, which makes me well-equipped to expand my knowledge as I do believe that

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is a bright

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in the future. By the way, I will have two weeks gap period before my new job.

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, I planned to go to your new home to visit your family as I promised that I will go to your house to catch up with you. I am sorry that the plan was delayed due to the pandemic. Looking forward to seeing you in the summertime! Yours faithfully, XXXXX

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Jun 20, 2022

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

269 words

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The Closing

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