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Some pepole say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and becom disciplined. Others argue that teenagers should not sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work . Discusee both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, many people believe that
youngsters
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 have to start
work
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 upon completion of their school.
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, others argue that they should take some rest
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 of going to
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 essay will provide both views and will provide my opinion in the end. On the one hand, teenagers have to initiate to earn wages by doing
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 after school.
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 will make them enough mature in terms of team spirit, co-operation and building confidence when trying to achieve targets set by their employers.
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, young people, in western countries
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 as the USA, and Canada, would start involving part-time jobs during their studies.
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 still builds their confidence and feel energetic while doing their
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.
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,
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 will improve not only their attitude but
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 become disciplined in their career.
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, in
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 hectic world,
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 are busy with their academic studies. They have to take some rest by playing indoor or outdoor games to rejuvenate.
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, they will be put under a lot of stress if they start involving in
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 activities.
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, The survey concludes that 80% of
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 face health issues
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 as anxiety and depression.
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, Younger people should not sacrifice rest. To conclude, teenagers are required to do
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 to face society during school time. Others think they have to refresh their minds. In my opinion,
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youngsters
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 have been involved in sports games in order to refresh their minds after the institution, they cannot be ready to face the real world in terms of their career.
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