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Fewer schools require school children to learn and improve their handwriting skills. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this trend?

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Lesser number of
schools
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 allows
school
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 children to learn and develop their
handwritting
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handwriting
skills
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 the merits as
lesser
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 number of children will be able to read and write
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 later age.
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, it has been observed that most
schools
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 no longer aim at ensuring that pupils and
students
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 are sound in their
writting
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skills
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, as they concentrate mainly on just teaching them randomly, without putting full efforts to ensure that their
students
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 are sound in their
writting
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students
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 who can not write and read even later years.
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, in some states in Nigeria ,it has been observed that even high
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graduates
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 cannot write and read effectively, as
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 is the result of bad teaching background
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 the
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 they attended.
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, many
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 now base their teachings on extra curriculum activities. Activities
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 as music class, drama classes, excursion, nutrition class and so on, forgetting the basic teachings which should be given to these children ,starting from guiding and teaching them how to develop their
writting
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. All these
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 to
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 of
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graduates
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 who can not defend themselves outside. A plain example is the current state of the country's organisation where we have
graduates
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 who can not defend their certificates. In conclusion, it has been observed that majority of
schools
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 are no longer interested in developing their
students
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 hand
writting
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writing
skills
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 has led to
graduates
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 who can not write and read , and
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graduates
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 who can not defend their gotten
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, leading to a bad state of the country.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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