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Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

#students #access #information #libraries
It is true that nowadays
students
 can quickly get most
information
 through the Internet.
However
, I disagree with the idea of abolishing libraries because they are important roles in our lives. On the one hand, I believe that Internet accessibility provides us
a
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faster way to get
data
. The main reason is that there is
latest
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 knowledge online, and the
data
 is easy to access by just searching the keywords.
Moreover
, people can use online services without a time and place limit, they can check
information
in
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at
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 any time as well as everywhere.
For instance
, youngsters who are planning to go on a vacation,
they
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can use Google
map
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Maps
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 to help them find the route before the trip.
However
, there exists some false
information
in
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on
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 some websites, and the youth should be careful when checking it.
On the other hand
, I would argue that the library still stands a vital role in our daily lives.
Firstly
, it provides us with a quiet place for studying, which was important for
students
 preparing for a test. Take the study room
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 example, every time during the final exam week, there are always full of hard-working
students
 preparing for the upcoming exam.
Secondly
, there are bountiful theoretical
data
 in a library than on the website,
students
 can find more detailed
information
 to support their papers.
Lastly
, the books or
data
 we found in a library are accurate
data
 provided by scholars. In conclusion, I believe that online searching is indispensable in our lives by enabling us to find
data
 quickly, but libraries are equally important for providing us with study places, detailed
information
, and reliable
data
.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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