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In many countries, there is a push to get as many young people going to university as possible. To what extent do you think this effort is a worthwhile one? Do you think some people can benefit from not going to university? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 they say
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 is the key to a successful life. And as
such
, many youngsters are forced to obtain a University certificate. While it is beneficial, I completely disagree that the effort is worth it for many young
people
 as some are better off without a
degree
.
First
 of all, the option of getting a higher education should be a choice.
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 is because
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this
 time and age, so many
people
 succeed without it as certain talents cannot be learnt in schools.
Therefore
, it is
impreritive
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imperative
 that parents hear from their kids and decide if
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formal or informal education is the best way forward for the child. Today, so many thriving companies
such
 as Apple, HP,
Google
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 are owned by individuals who never got a
degree
.
This
 just shows that not everyone is meant to continue on a formal path. As the world advances in many areas,
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 believe that it has advanced in knowing that there are so many benefits for
people
 who do not have a University
degree
. In
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 will discuss two
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 why. Starting off, some young
people
 are naturally gifted vocational workers who are very talented in occupations
such
 as
capentary
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carpentry
carpenter
, mechanic, or cooking.
Therefore
, going to school is of no benefit to them.
Socondly
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Secondly
, resources
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 could be saved for something more important. Once an individual is convinced of their path in life, he/she
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 able to save up time and money intended for school for his business. In conclusion, obtaining a university
degree
 is highly valued in various countries.
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,
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 completely disagree and feel that youngsters should be given an
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opportunity
oppurtunity
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opportunity
 to choose what they would like to do
next
 in life.
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