In many countries, there is a push to get as many young people going to university as possible. To what extent do you think this effort is a worthwhile one? Do you think some people can benefit from not going to university? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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is the key to a successful life. And as

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, many youngsters are forced to obtain a University certificate. While it is beneficial, I completely disagree that the effort is worth it for many young

people

as some are better off without a

degree

.

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of all, the option of getting a higher education should be a choice.

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is because

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time and age, so many

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succeed without it as certain talents cannot be learnt in schools.

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, it is

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imperative

that parents hear from their kids and decide if

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formal or informal education is the best way forward for the child. Today, so many thriving companies

such

as Apple, HP,

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are owned by individuals who never got a

degree

.

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just shows that not everyone is meant to continue on a formal path. As the world advances in many areas,

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believe that it has advanced in knowing that there are so many benefits for

people

who do not have a University

degree

. In

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will discuss two

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why. Starting off, some young

people

are naturally gifted vocational workers who are very talented in occupations

such

as

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carpentry

carpenter

, mechanic, or cooking.

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, going to school is of no benefit to them.

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Secondly

, resources

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could be saved for something more important. Once an individual is convinced of their path in life, he/she

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able to save up time and money intended for school for his business. In conclusion, obtaining a university

degree

is highly valued in various countries.

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,

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completely disagree and feel that youngsters should be given an

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opportunity

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opportunity

to choose what they would like to do

next

in life.