Some people think that in school discipline should be the job of teacher whereas some believe it is the parent's accountability. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

There is no denying that the
teacher
is the one who directs a
child
's future. Fewer individuals believe that in school
discipline
should be the
teacher
's job whereas some believe it is the parent's accountability. I wholeheartedly believe,
this
trend should be changed.
Firstly
, many support the view that children must be disciplined by the
teacher
when they are in school as teachers
duty
because, they are paid by the parents or the government hense, the
teacher
has the
duty
to build up the
child
's affective domain while focusing on the cognitive domain and psychomotor domain. As an example educator must be superior to the
child
in academic knowledge and spiritual life.
Moreover
, the educator must develop trustability, respect, and be obedient in the
kid
's heart. By way of example, the educator should be a good illustration for the
kid
to follow.
Furthermore
, the scholar should be closer to the
kid
like a mother with kindness, love, and care which will result in bridging the gap.
Hence
, the scholar is the right person who must take responsibility for building good
morals
.
On the other hand
, the parent has the accountability for developing attitudes and
morals
in the
kid
's life because the
kid
spends only five hours with teachers but the rest of the day spend with their parents. Since parents are strucked with their jobs they do not have time to spend with kids, so they always pass their
duty
to the
teacher
.
For example
, most children come from broken families and bad cultural backgrounds which will result in naughty attitudes and bad
morals
to them.
Such
, a kind of
child
will break the classroom
discipline
. Family culture is the mirror of a
child
's
discipline
. As educational psychology says more than 75% of the
child
morals
and ethics are built by their family.
Therefore
, family members have a major role to develop
kid
discipline
by involving kids in spiritual activities and teaching them to respect adults, which will inspire their courtesy. To sum up, taking everything into consideration, building
kid
discipline
is a
teacher
's
duty
as it is paid job, but the parent has more authority than the
teacher
to build a disciplined
child
.
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