You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter o give details of your study plans o explain why you want to get a part-time job o suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Zoe, I hope you are doing well in Singapore. I am writing

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letter to you as I would like you to know about my study plan at National Technology University (NTU) Singapore and I want to ask you how to apply for part-time jobs.

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with, it is a great chance for me to get an offer from the university in order to study Electronic -Engineering Courses as a full-time student and

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is for two-year courses. As you know, the courses and accommodation fees in Singapore are very expensive.

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, I would like to do a part-time

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while I am studying in order to meet my basic needs. To be frank with you, I am not quite sure how to search or apply for a part-time

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, I am pretty sure that you are able to help me since you have been working there for over five years and you could give me advice on some

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applications that are useful especially for students to find a part-time

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. I hope you could help me with

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case and see you in the near future. Best Regards Sandar Myint

Submitted by sandarmyint740 on Tue Jun 21 2022

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
Job hunting strategies

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