Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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The importance of clothes to

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judge

culture and

character

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which was always debatable has now become more

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controversial

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potential impact in recent years. In my

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the latter proposition appears to be more rational.

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my views on

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foremost reason behind

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is that we can judge the culture of the

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depending

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outfit and

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appeal

apparel

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if a

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is from village área of

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they normally wear kurta

pjama

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pyjama

, whereas a

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from the city área they wear Jeans,

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T-shirt

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discussing, it cannot be ignored that the main reason

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behind

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that as per the choice of

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clothes

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we cannot make

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on the attitude of the

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. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying

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steams from the

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is that culture is

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developed

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developed

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which type of environment he or she is grown up

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in, what

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and what

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type of experience he or she has gained,

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apply

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beliefs

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beliefs

and ethics he or she follows.

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recently we have

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the news of

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that saints have been arrested for

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the land and sexual

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harassment

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cases.

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the

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not identified once attitude and

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of the

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. It varies from

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person

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clothes are the only choice of the

person

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what he or she

choose

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to wear. To culminate, I reiterate that there are plenty of strong factors supporting that outfit of the

person

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does not

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the

character

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character

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depend

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where he or she is brought up and how they are get

develped

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developed

mentally and physically.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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300 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

garments
traditional attire
sartorial choices
expressive style
cultural identity
psychological implications
non-verbal cues
globalization
perceptions
professional demeanor
societal norms
economic constraints
subcultures
fashion movements
individualism
stereotype

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some children spend a long time each day on their smartphones. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

More people today put their personal and private information online (address, telephone number, credit card number) to do everyday activities such as banking, shopping, and socializing. Is this a positive or negative development?

Now a days, many families are rarely having meals together. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development.

Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?