In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries is declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?

It is often argued that in many nations, there has been a considerable decline in the number of individuals who

visit

museums.

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essay will discuss the reasons behind

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issue and how

this

problem can be mitigated. Nowadays, it is commonly observed that very few

people

like to

visit

art

galleries. One of the main

reason

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behind

this

is

lack

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the lack

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of interest of

public

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the public

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in exploring

art

and culture.

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is because, they have abundant sources of entertainment

such

as cinemas, amusement parks and shopping malls. To illustrate, in a survey done in

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Europe,

majority

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the majority

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of the youngsters opted

cinema

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for cinema

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in comparison to the museums.

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the other reason is

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the easy

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accessibility of everything over

internet

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.With the advancement in technology, it is very easy and convenient to obtain information from any part of the world.

For instance

, in the present

times

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art

exhibitions can be accessed easily online through various websites. Henceforth, these factors contribute to

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in the

individuals

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to the museums and galleries.

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this

problem can be sorted out by the combined efforts of both the governing bodies as well as the public.

Art

festivals can be organised by the governments which will definitely fascinate the

people

to

visit

such

places. One of the best examples, of

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can be seen in India where

such

festivals are organised by different states so that more and more

people

get interested in

such

activities.

Moreover

, children in the schools should be motivated by the teachers to

visit

such

places for their betterment so that they can learn about the history and culture of their respective nations.

Therefore

, contribution by both the

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authorities

and individuals can solve

this

problem. To conclude, it has been observed that in

the

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recent times the number of

people

who

visit

art

galleries has become less

as

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compared to the past. The reasons behind

this

decline are advanced technology and more sources of entertainment which are more alluring.

However

,

this

issue can be sorted out if both the government and citizens make combined efforts.