Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled and that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Every day global warming is increasing and air, sea and land are getting polluted. Many
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that
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due to not enough
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are recycle
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are recycling
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the
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waste.
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think that government should make
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recycle
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waste from homes. I agree with
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statement and
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not only
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they should give rewards for recycling.
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with,
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are many things at home that we are not recycling
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, like newspaper, paper gift wrapper and notebook or
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. Normally
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just throw that into
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after the usage, and as
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more trees are
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down to create new paper. If
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recycle the paper, it can save lots of trees.
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, similar
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plastic,
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empty soft drink
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, mike
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and plastic
bags
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they throw
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trash
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of
recycle
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it
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.
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,
government
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should create
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laws for recyclable trash at home. Like
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should separate the recyclable and non-recyclable in different bins. and if anyone fails to do it, there should be some penalty for it. They should
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give some
reward
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for
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who
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do recycle properly,
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will encourage them and create a good habit. In conclusion,
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not recycling enough from their
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homes
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like
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and plastics. Government should impose
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for recycling and
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give
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the incentive
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incentive
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to encourage
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more
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for it.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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