Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled and that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every day global warming is increasing and air, sea and land are getting polluted. Many
people
is believe
thatChange the verb form
believe
,
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apply
this
due to not enough people
are recycle
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are recycling
the
waste. Change the word
their
In
addition
they Add a comma
,addition
also
think that government should make law
for Fix the agreement mistake
laws
recycle
waste from homes. I agree with Change the verb form
recycling
this
statement and in
addition
not only Add a comma
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law
but Add an article
the law
also
they should give rewards for recycling.
To begin
with, There
are many things at home that we are not recyclingFix capitalization
there
it
, like newspaper, paper gift wrapper and notebook or Correct pronoun usage
apply
magazine
. Normally Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
people
just throw that into trash
after the usage, and as Add an article
the trash
a
more trees are Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
cutting
down to create new paper. If Wrong verb form
cut
people
recycle the paper, it can save lots of trees. In addition
, similar for
plastic, Change preposition
to
like
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apply
bottle
, mike Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
carton
and plastic Fix the agreement mistake
cartons
bags
they throw Add a comma
,bags
away
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them away
into
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in
trash
after the use Add an article
the trash
instead
of recycle
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recycling
it
.
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them
Furthermore
, government
should create Add an article
the government
the
laws for recyclable trash at home. Like Correct article usage
apply
People
should separate the recyclable and non-recyclable in different bins. and if anyone fails to do it, there should be some penalty for it. They should also
give some reward
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rewards
for
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to
who
do recycle properly, Correct pronoun usage
those who
this
will encourage them and create a good habit.
In conclusion, People
not recycling enough from their home
like Change the noun form
homes
papers
and plastics. Government should impose Fix the agreement mistake
paper
law
for recycling and Correct article usage
a law
also
give Change the article
the incentive
incentive
to encourage Fix the agreement mistake
incentives
for
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apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite