Write a letter to your manager to report a mistake you found in a magazine article about your company In your letter • Describe the magazine and the article. • What was the mistake? • Explain what you would like the manager to do about it.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Nathasha Weerasinghe
who
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working at "Star PVT Ltd" is an international
company
. I am writing to report a mistake that I found in your magazine
article
last
week about my
company
. The "Mirror" magazine is the most popular among businessmen. As I remembered, you are made an interview with our Product Manager on 06.05.2022 regarding
this
article
.
Then
, you published the
article
about the services and products of the "Star"
company
. . I would like to appreciate highly your co-operation.
Nevertheless
, there was a mistake regarding our products. You were mentioned in that
article
, 'Star
company
produce stationaries".
However
, I would like to inform you that we are produced only baby items. You
are
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mentioned
about
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our services and
that is
corrected. It is greatly appreciated if you could correct
this
immediately due to it would impact on our
company
reputation. Yours faithfully Nathasha Weerasinghe
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