Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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this

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fast-paced world, everyone has a different taste when it comes to clothing, where some like to dress perfectly while

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don't. There are some institutions

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ween that their

workers

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should

dressed

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be dressed

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up neatly and smartly.There are

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others

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who reckon that the perfection of the job plays a vital role over

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appearance

apperance

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appearance

. In my point of view, I believe the

quality

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is more important than the looks of clothing.

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with, some

organisation

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organisations

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believe that employees,

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of

work

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will take the

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institution to

institution

institutionto

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institution to

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phase,

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the

workers

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dressing style. The major quote of some organisations

are

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is

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quality

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products will increase

customers

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.

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, most

of

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the

companies

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will follow

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to attract

customers

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.

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,

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customers

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satisfaction depends only on the lifetime of the products they buy from the organisation not

from

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on

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the

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how the

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employees

empoyees

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employees

of the company dressed? By having

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in mind

companies

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choose the

empoyee

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employee

with skills

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from the

way

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of dressing.

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, In a recent survey, it is shown that the organisation which is keen more in skills of the worker than the

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appearances

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are reaching great heights.

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, some

institution

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institutions

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want their

workers

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to be dressed smartly.

Companies

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think the

way

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employee

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employees

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look will give confidence in

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their

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work

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and it will be perfect.

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,the

employee

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will be interacting with the clients so the

ways

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way

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of dressing

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apply

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the

employee

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needs

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to be perfect and smart. if the

employee

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is not properly dressed,some clients feel bad so the

companies

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think not to give a chance in that and want their

workers

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to be perfectly dressed. To illustrate, in a recent survey, it is shown some organisations are attracting the

customers

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by the

way

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of

employees

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employees'

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dressing

style

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styles

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. To conclude, from the above points some think the skills and

quality

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of the

work

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will take to the

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stage while others think the

way

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of employees smart dressing style will

also

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do that. I

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believe

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belive

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believe

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the

quality

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of

work

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from the worker is more important than the dressing

way

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.