You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: which course you have been applied for why you cannot join the course ask about the possibility of the course in the future Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase First of all. Consider adding a comma.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase keen interest seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
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It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction Although. Consider removing the comma.
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Your sentence appears to use the incorrect form of fees. Consider changing it to singular.
The noun phrase burden seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase According to these reasons. Consider adding a comma.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase great support seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite