You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: which course you have been applied for why you cannot join the course ask about the possibility of the course in the future Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear sir/madam,
First
of all
I am thanking you for accepting my application for joining the graduation course Add a comma
,all
in
your college, starting Change preposition
at
on
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apply
next
month. Unfortunately, I could not attend the class from next
month, due to some personal problems.
I have keen
interest in learning computer science Add an article
a keen
from
my childhood, Change preposition
since
that
forced me to apply to the best college in my state. Correct pronoun usage
which
Although
,
your college provides Remove the comma
apply
best
teaching faculty, the Correct article usage
the best
fees
structure is Change the noun form
fee
burden
for a person like me who comes from the outskirts of the city. Add an article
a burden
Furthermore
, my enquire about the scholorships
for the applied course are currently not available for Correct your spelling
scholarships
this
academic year
. According to these reasons
I cannot join the course Add a comma
,reasons
on
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apply
this
academic year
. However
, I would arrange the educational loan and it will be granted me
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to me
on
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apply
next
year
.
So, If it is possible I am requesting you to consider my application to
the Change preposition
for
next
academic year
. I will be great
support for me to achieve my dream to become a graduate in computer science. I am waiting for your valuable reply.
Yours sincerely,
David JohnAdd an article
a great
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite