Some believe that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think they should have the right to behave as individuals. Discuss both the perspectives and give your opinion.

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modern age is giving more priority to the individuals after they have achieved freedom
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period. Some people believe that
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generation should follow the
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of their communities. Whereas, others think that they should have the authority to react as individuals. I will elaborate my perspectives regarding both
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with suitable examples in subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, I will not render negligence to numerous cultures in form of ongoing
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, as these are mandatory to maintain our
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legacy, and somewhere they are contributing to
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of different cultures among different citizens of nations.
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, through
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we can easily get to know about
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the variety
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of ethnic wear
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different arenas. To explicate ,
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is considered
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a prominent dress in
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a state
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state
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like Punjab.
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, another item includes
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footwear in form of "
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the largest state of India namely Rajasthan which carries "lehanga and Choli" for their
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. Whereas,
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masses still wear "Dhoti and Kurta" to maintain their comfort
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old age groups. Moving
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contemporary era, individuals rarely follow the
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, they usually prefer to catch the things of their own choice ,
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of giving that much importance to preceding
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, they prefer to wear
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a western
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dress more
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to ethnic,
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there are some exceptions,who are more fascinated towards wearing
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traditionals
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traditional
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but only on special occasions. For epitome, I personally prefer to wear "Suit and Salwar" which is is very famous in Haryana usually on occasions
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as Raksha
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, Diwali etc. and rest population render their interest in western clothes.
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my parents pressurise me for taking
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old trend ahead,
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as it
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my
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, so
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limit
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limit
myself in the context of following
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. To conclude,
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customers
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crucial for
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of different arena civilisations.
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,human instincts are
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valuable. So , we should not neglect our
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of
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our desires.
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