Some believe that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think they should have the right to behave as individuals. Discuss both the perspectives and give your opinion.

This

modern age is giving more priority to the individuals after they have achieved freedom

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period. Some people believe that

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generation should follow the

traditions

of their communities. Whereas, others think that they should have the authority to react as individuals. I will elaborate my perspectives regarding both

further

with suitable examples in subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, I will not render negligence to numerous cultures in form of ongoing

traditions

, as these are mandatory to maintain our

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legacy, and somewhere they are contributing to

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of different cultures among different citizens of nations.

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, through

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we can easily get to know about

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of ethnic wear

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different arenas. To explicate ,

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pajama

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is considered

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a prominent dress in

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state

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like Punjab.

Moreover

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footwear in form of "

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" which represents the state's identity. Another example includes

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the largest state of India namely Rajasthan which carries "lehanga and Choli" for their

traditions

. Whereas,

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masses still wear "Dhoti and Kurta" to maintain their comfort

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old age groups. Moving

further

, In

this

contemporary era, individuals rarely follow the

traditions

, they usually prefer to catch the things of their own choice ,

instead

of giving that much importance to preceding

traditions

.

For instance

, they prefer to wear

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dress more

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to ethnic,

although

there are some exceptions,who are more fascinated towards wearing

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traditionals

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traditional

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but only on special occasions. For epitome, I personally prefer to wear "Suit and Salwar" which is is very famous in Haryana usually on occasions

such

as Raksha

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, Diwali etc. and rest population render their interest in western clothes.

Although

my parents pressurise me for taking

this

old trend ahead,

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as it

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my

likings

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limit

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limit

myself in the context of following

traditions

. To conclude,

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customers

are

also

crucial for

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of different arena civilisations.

However

,human instincts are

also

valuable. So , we should not neglect our

traditions

with

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of

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our desires.