In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, in marriage life, some people think that it is important to be responsible to become the shareholder of finance in a family. In my opinion, I strongly agree with

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statement due to following reasons. To start with, if

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husbands and wives do not share the responsibility of funding for a home, it might result in a huge impact on our bodies. To make

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clear, becoming a breadwinner for a whole family certainly put a lot of pressure on one’s shoulder.

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, 57% of divorce cases happened because of the strives between parents in New Zealand. Contributing to those quarrels are partly the tension of a workforce in companies while the remaining are the families.

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, working in a stressful environment with peer pressure or the manager sometimes leads to overloaded work which seriously affects one’s health.

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, it is likely to have a partner who can share financial problems in order to tackle it.

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, I firmly believe that having someone who can help us to relieve alleviates the financial burden of one’s home. To clarify

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mothers and fathers go to work to make ends meet surely can reduce the strain on the economy. To illustrate, in 80% of accommodations in Asia countries,

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parents have an adequate job to work financial issues out.

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results in 54% of families in

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mostly financially independent and working things out on their own.

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, owning one own job oneself improves self-esteem as well as advancing in their career.

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, dividing roles, in

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case, can mitigate the economic concerns in a family. In conclusion, after the aforementioned reasons, it is no doubt that

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wives and husbands should subsidize the role in the expenditure of their own families.

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