Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons for long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer in such situations?
Married couples at times stay far away from each other. So, keeping up with bonding becomes hard and stressful. The reasons for
such
situations vary from Linking Words
the
migration to foreign countries, awkward job places and conditions, and caring for elderly parents or younger kids.To bring them together we can suggest using the internet and video calling more Correct article usage
apply
frequent
in communications, sending gifts and letters Change the word
frequently
as well as
staying busy with some activities like socialization or classes, Linking Words
visiting
one another when possible .
Correct word choice
and visiting
To begin
with, in today's life of Linking Words
globalisation
it happens Add a comma
globalisation,
the
number of times that husband and wife have to stay separate for a longer period of time Correct article usage
a
due to
one partner moving to a different country for work. Linking Words
Furthermore
, in jobs like oilfields where conditions of working and living are not suitable for families, they Linking Words
require
to stay apart. Wrong verb form
are required
Moreover
, the duty of care for older parents at home or younger children pushes married people to separate. Linking Words
Additionally
, getting admission to prestigious universities which are located at different locations than their living area Linking Words
also
forces a separation. Linking Words
This
means that in the present era of development choices of partners and their expectations from life endure them to live apart from another half.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
for overcoming
the boredom of living single and staying connected to their loved ones, they can use technology like the World Wide Web, Zoom and Whats app to make video calls Change preposition
to overcome
and
see each other Correct word choice
apply
life
and talk for longer periods of time when feasible. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
Although
they can not meet still they can manage to stay Linking Words
live
in their hearts by giving gifts and writing and expressing their feeling in their letters. getting engaged in favourite activities Correct your spelling
alive
such
as cooking classes or learning a musical instrument is the best way of killing time of loneliness.
In conclusion, as mentioned above,there could be a wide range of reasons, for forcing families to stay alone and remedies for keeping them in touch can Linking Words
also
be different from pair to pair depending on their situation.Linking Words
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