A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called” The book that influenced me the most” Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most, in your letter Describe what this book was about Explain how this book influenced you Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people?

Dear Chris, I am writing
this
letter to tell you about the
book
recently published by yourself;
book
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influenced me
most
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. It really touched the spirit of enhancing the habits of daily life and its approaches. The
book
delve
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detail
the
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necessary requirements for a successful leader in managing
the
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time efficiently.
Moreover
, the required tips in managing the teams according to the business vision. I really got surprised
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way in which, after applying those essential
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activities in my recent job project. The results as published were remarkable by achieving the same results in the company quarter body meeting.
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, I am applying those values in my daily routines to enhance the pleasant life opportunity till the end. I would like
also
like to tell you that
this
piece of work will be going to be a
game changer
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for people working in all sectors as managers.
Moreover
,
this
will enhance the young professionals to climb the leadership ladder with more preferable ease of information access throughout their career life. I look forward to hearing from you soon about my views on the
book
. Yours faithfully James Joseph.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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