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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Explain why you want to take time off work Give details of the amount of time you need. Suggest how you work could be covered while you are away.

#company #time #work #manager #amount
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to grant me
leave
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a leave
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 of absence from
office
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the office
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 for the upcoming week from
1st
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the 1st
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 of July to
10th
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the 10th
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 of July. Earlier I was unable to take some time off work due to the hectic office schedule and needed to work continuously in order to accomplish my targets.Now, I have decided to accompany my parents who are residing
at
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in
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 my hometown Ambala city and
wants
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want
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 to
spent
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 some quality time with them. At
this
 time, I have only limited tasks to perform,
therefore
, I want to utilize
this
 period in order to meet my parents.
Additionally
, It will
made
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 me feel relaxed
from
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after
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 busy office hours.
In addition
 to it,Amar has agreed
upon
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apply
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to take care of urgent work that requires immediate action.
Moreover
, She
also
 agreed to send all the financial reports to higher authorities as well.
However
, I will be available on the call if any concern needs my attention. I would really appreciate it if you could approve my leave application. Looking forward to hearing from your side. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Respectful greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's name],')
  • Time off, absence, leave of absence
  • Personal circumstances, compelling reason
  • Duration, number of days/weeks
  • Cover duties, delegate tasks, work handover
  • Alternative arrangements, contingency plans
  • Preparation, advance work, assistance
  • Gratitude, appreciate, understanding
  • Inconvenience, minimal disruption
  • Request approval, formally request
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