You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: which course you have been applied for why you cannot join the course ask about the possibility of the course in the future Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear sir I am writing

this

letter to thank you for accepting me to the English course it is very important for me to attend it, but unfortunately, I apologize for not attending

this

important class ,simply due to some reason I will not be able to come.

Firstly

I need to take the course to get an IELTS exam, but I have had an accident and my doctor says my hand is fully broken, so I have to do surgery as soon as possible.

In addition

, I have to stay for a while at the hospital till I totally get better. Please if there is a chance to take that class in the sooner future I would be very grateful to you . Could you give me that course even though private or online after my surgery? If yes please contact me . Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Nona.

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7 paragraphs

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8.50

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