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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do yo agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Junk
food
 has ended up community with health issues which increases in some countries.
This
 causes the country administrators better to enforce
tax
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taxes
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 higher than before on that kind of
food
. I agree that if the governments decide
this
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 policy, it will give some advantages to the population.
This
 manuscript will elaborate
first
 on the problems of the raising
of
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fast
food
 consumption and
second
 will discuss the
government
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government's
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 decision on increasing
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fast-food
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fast
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the fast
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food
 tax.
People
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food
 consumption affects their health which influences their fitness, energy, productivity, and so on. The modern era has changed
peoples’
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people's
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
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 and eating
habit
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habits
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. Nowadays,
people
 are demanded to work faster.
Therefore
, the culinary world has evolved.
For instance
, the growth of franchise restaurants which serve instant and fast meals.
Although
,
this
changing
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 gives ease to
the
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society’s life, but
also
 it brings negative impacts
for
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 their well-being.
The chronic
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 diseases,
such
 as
diabetic
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diabetes
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, cholesterol, obesity, culinary
addict
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,
hearth
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heart
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 disease, etc. have become a nightmare. Due to the ingredients of these cuisines
are
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 low-off nutritional value
the
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they
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 mainly a balanced diet. High glucose,
natrium
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atrium
,
coloring
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colouring
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 and preservative substance, and fat as well lead the folks vulnerable to
those disease
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that disease
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.
Hence
, it impacts
to
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their productivity on a daily basis. The higher authorities are expected to solve
this
 issue. Because it burdens the country which
influence
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 the financial account.
For example
, the governments have to spend more budgets on
healthy
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the healthy
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 sector providing more cutting-edge facilities, medicines, and health administrators. On the other
hands
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hand
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, unhealthy
people
 cannot contribute to the nation since have to take permission from their workplace to get some treatments regularly.
In addition
, these
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chronic
chronical
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chronic
 diseases rise up
the
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 mortality rate around the world.
Thus
, imposing
tax
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 on these industries perhaps become one of the solutions.
This
 policy will drive
people
 to eat
les
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less
 fast foot and change their diets which can maintain their fitness.
Besides
, the ministries can get more income from the taxes. To summarize, I myself personally argue that increasing quick
meals
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meal
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 taxes will positively encourage
people
 to consume healthy meals, reform
the
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 eating
behavior
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, and lower the mortality rate. After
thorough
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 analysis
on
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this
 subject,
this
 idea will bring merits to the country itself. The national income can be allocated to improve other sectors.
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