In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do yo agree or disagree with this opinion?

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has ended up community with health issues which increases in some countries.

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causes the country administrators better to enforce

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higher than before on that kind of

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. I agree that if the governments decide

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policy, it will give some advantages to the population.

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manuscript will elaborate

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on the problems of the raising

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apply

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fast

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consumption and

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will discuss the

government

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decision on increasing

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fast

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food

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tax.

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People

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food

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consumption affects their health which influences their fitness, energy, productivity, and so on. The modern era has changed

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lifestyle

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lifestyles

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and eating

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. Nowadays,

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are demanded to work faster.

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, the culinary world has evolved.

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, the growth of franchise restaurants which serve instant and fast meals.

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,

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changing

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gives ease to

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society’s life, but

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it brings negative impacts

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their well-being.

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diseases,

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as

diabetic

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, cholesterol, obesity, culinary

addict

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,

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disease, etc. have become a nightmare. Due to the ingredients of these cuisines

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low-off nutritional value

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mainly a balanced diet. High glucose,

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atrium

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and preservative substance, and fat as well lead the folks vulnerable to

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.

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, it impacts

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their productivity on a daily basis. The higher authorities are expected to solve

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issue. Because it burdens the country which

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the financial account.

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, the governments have to spend more budgets on

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the healthy

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sector providing more cutting-edge facilities, medicines, and health administrators. On the other

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, unhealthy

people

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cannot contribute to the nation since have to take permission from their workplace to get some treatments regularly.

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, these

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chronic

chronical

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diseases rise up

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mortality rate around the world.

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, imposing

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on these industries perhaps become one of the solutions.

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policy will drive

people

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to eat

les

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less

fast foot and change their diets which can maintain their fitness.

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, the ministries can get more income from the taxes. To summarize, I myself personally argue that increasing quick

meals

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taxes will positively encourage

people

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to consume healthy meals, reform

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their

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eating

behavior

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, and lower the mortality rate. After

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analysis

on

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this

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subject,

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idea will bring merits to the country itself. The national income can be allocated to improve other sectors.