: Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?
Art
is one
of entertainment
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the entertainment
aspect
of human life. Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
Art
subjects
, namely painting and drawing are vital for children
's brain development
as other subjects
. I completely agree that Art
subjects
should be compulsory in high schools. This
essay would discuss the positive and negative aspects of art
classes for development
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the development
children
as other subjects
.
On the one
hand, there are a lot of advantages to this
. Firstly
and foremost, arts will improve children
's entertainment part of life. Secondly
, It will improve children
's brain development
to think positively and creatively. For example
, when doing any work by
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children
who are doing painting and drawing that they are thing it on creatively. Hence
, art
will make an artistic person in society.
On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages. One
of them is youngers do not think creatively due to their mind do not focus on it. Another one
is children
tend to do dangerous things. To illustrate, according to the recent research that found 50% of children
who are not doing art
as a subject in the school is tend to do immoral things such
as use
of siggarrate and drugs. Add an article
the use
Therefore
, children
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children's
mind
should be changed through Fix the agreement mistake
minds
Arts
subject.
To sum up, many benefits and a few drawbacks are there. Correct article usage
the Arts
Then
, it is very essential to guide children
towards artistic works like drawing and painting because it will lead children's
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development
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subjects
. In my purview, art
subject should be compulsory in the higher schools and colleges syllabus.Submitted by natha92714 on
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