We are in a celebrity-obsessed world, and what famous persons especially those with ordinary backgrounds say or do always make news headlines. The factors contributing to
phenomenon will be discussed in
essay along with the reasons why I believe
is a curse rather than a blessing.
The obvious gap in the living standards between well-known persons and ordinary
phenomenon. It is generally acknowledged that the vast majority of
can monetize their accounts and accumulate massive wealth instantly, purchasing what their desire without taking costs into consideration.
, the average
are confronted with various problems caused by not having enough money.
, they find it difficult to buy a flat or afford the tuition fee for their children.
who struggle to afford even the basic necessities of life have so much interest in
who seem to have everything so easy.
leads to some undesirable results.
are always in the spotlight and reap a myriad of fans who show great admiration
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their idols. Most of these famous
are living extravagant lifestyles, wearing designer clothes and driving luxurious cars. Their admirers choose to support them by following their lifestyles
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and purchasing those pricy products, even if they cannot afford them.
, these fans have to reduce the amount of money spent on other facets of their
as health, workouts and
education lowering their life quality.
, exposure to the
of well-known persons with ordinary backgrounds will inspire average
to obtain fame at any cost for the sake of achieving high-quality
. In their desperation to gain fame, some of these
leak their porn clips online or make racist remarks, which not only achieves a bad name for them but
sets negative examples for others.
In conclusion, ordinary
’s interest in
can be attributed to the differences between their
and those of famous ones, and
interest is a negative thing, since
may lower their life quality and make some of them embark on the wrong path.