The Growing Number Of Overweight People Is Putting A Strain On The Health Care System In An Effort To Deal With The Health Issues Involved. Some People Think That The Best Way To Deal With This Problem Is To Introduce More Physical Education lessons in the school curriculum.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While the number of obese people is increasing dramatically, the
health
care system is suffering to find the ideal method to tackle
this
problem. It is thought by individuals the perfect method to address
this
issue is through corporating more sports
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during
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school stage. I completely agree with
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concepts
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will reflect good
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in
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mental
health
.
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regular
excercices
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exercise
exercises
is playing a vital role in children's lifestyle,
therefore
, sport concept should be taught more and more by all educational institutions to make sure that students will be able to find their future interests in the
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field.
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, students who followed their
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desirs
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desires
from the
first
educational stage are still doing these
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exercises
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regularly
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regularly
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their work or study.
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the number of
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over weights
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will
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decrease
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decrease
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time.
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exercises
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exercises
in school would be beneficial for maintaining the mental
health
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.
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, according to most psychologists, the
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size of the brain for
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athletes
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is bigger than other's
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exercises
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity rates
  • health care system
  • physical education
  • instill
  • long term
  • raise awareness
  • healthier lifestyle choices
  • nutritional education
  • active transport
  • quality of instruction
  • facilities and equipment
  • diet control initiatives
  • community sports programs
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