A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money,either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years,or to pay for two open concerts.It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter .describe the benefits of sponsoring the the sports team .summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts .say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of the
citizen
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citizens

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who
live
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lives

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in muscat. I heard your company collecting
feedbacks
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feedback

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from the residents regarding your fund. I would like to share my opinion regarding
this
matter. Undoubtedly, the
sport
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sports

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team would be a huge
benefits
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benefit

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for the children for many reasons.
Firstly
, the kids will
acquired
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acquire

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new skills.
Secondly
,
its
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it's
it is

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a convenient way to keep them fit and
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energetic

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energatic
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Lastly
,
its
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it's
it is

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an efficient way to occupy them from street trobles and commit
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a crime
the crime

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crime
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crimes

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.
On the other hand
,
sponsor
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sponsoring

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concerts will entertain all the society
especially
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,especially

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it
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since it

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has been
long
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a long

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time since we host a concert here. It would
diffenetly
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differently

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attract people from other
cites
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cities

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and
thus
our local economy will
increased
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increase
be increased

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.
However
, my personal view is that to support the
sport
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sports

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team for our
youngster
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youngsters

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because it will help them
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a lot

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alot
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a lot

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when they participate in competitions.
Additionally
, some kids may take
this
seriously and take it as
future
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a future

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career. I thank you for
this
opportunity by allowing the residents
participate
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to participate

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in
this
election. Yours sincerely, Samah Ismail
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