Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

Violence
in playgrounds, everyday problems that can escalate to future problems
such
as child’s future
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characteristic
characteristics
charateristic
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. It’s crucial for parents to teach their spouts to not fight back
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bullies for their own sake. If
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children
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were to fight back, they will remember that
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problem
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problems
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which could lead
into
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to
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other
problem
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problems
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such
as
violence
in
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, or even worse abusing their power in public.
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will always be their option when they
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encounter
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encounter
any
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difficulties
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difficulties
.
Moreover
, fighting back can lead to an injury or even worse, disability. But even if
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children
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got
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and
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back,
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can still cause them a childhood nightmare, a
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trauma
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trauma
that is
going to keep haunting them until they overcome them or until they die.
This
could affect their personalities in many ways
such
as
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discourage
discouraged
, low
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or
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afraid
of people. No one
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to live their life
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though
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such
hellish experiences.
On the other hand
, learning to back down or
to
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negotiate their
way
out of
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is what every
parents
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should lecture their
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child
childs
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children
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. Not only they can avoid
violence
,
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they will
also
learn how to assess the situations, how
to
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solve
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conflict
confilct
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conflicts
and learn to be patient. Children who
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this
way
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likely to perform better in
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society
and have self-esteem.
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child will be living on in future, it’s
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best to educate them not to use
violence
on
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bullies.
Instead
, be patient and use their brain
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to
make their
way
out.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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