In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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mankind evolves, more and more
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of crimes
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everyday
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from homicide to cybercrimes. Viewers,
therefore
, are increasingly interested in
the
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criminal books and
TV
series
. In
this
essay, I will explain why
this
genre of novels and movie
series
are
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becoming infamous and
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my point of view on
this
category. There are two main reasons why the audiences
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the criminal category over others like comedy or sci-fi.
Crime
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genre provides a thrilling and mysterious feeling for the readers and viewers, and so it makes them
to
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dig in for more details to deeply understand the whole story. A comedy episode,
for example
, may be hilarious but
its
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content
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to
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simplistic, while a homicide case in a
TV
series
may take over several episodes, and it makes the audience
to
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feel
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to wait for the
next
one. Some people
also
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fond of watching the process of how police or detectives
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homicide or committed suicide cases. It could be when the detective
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evidences
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,
which
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related to the case
,
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or interrogate the suspects. From my point of view,
crime
books and
TV
series
would be most enjoyable if people spend around thirty minutes every
weeks
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for
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them. I think that
this
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is enough to keep the viewers
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in the thrilling events, but not too long to make it tedious. One example is the CSI
TV
series
that I was a fan of a few years ago. When I watched for more than two episodes a day,
however
, I feel a bit dizzy and could not keep up with all the sophisticated details in the storyline. If I had even
watching
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five or six episodes in a row, I believed that I would
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even
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insomnia because the case kept sticking in my head for the whole night. In conclusion,
crime
fiction and
TV
crime
series
have been increasingly engaging in recent years due to the fact that they
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a thrilling vibes
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to the audience. In my opinion,
however
, people should not
overwatching
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this
type of
TV
genre as it
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maybe
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harmful to your health.
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