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Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural life. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature?

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 world,
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 mostly spend their
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indoors
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, it is believed that
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 should be exposed to
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nature
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 more as it will help them relieve stress while
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 it will help the
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 to
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understand
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understand
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, when the youngsters spend most of their
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indoors
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 they will undergo mental illnesses
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 as stress, depression and sleep disturbance. It is true that
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 can be productive when
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indoors
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 watching educational videos
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for
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 themselves by playing video games or chatting with friends.
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, the
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 will be spending most of the
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 in
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environment
enviroment
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environment
 and after some
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 they will become
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bored
 and cause above mentioned diseases. But when the
children
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 can go outside and learn to
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understand
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understand
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nature
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 they will be able to eliminate or reduce mental illnesses.
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, when the
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 learn to go outside and appreciate
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nature
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 they will become more active.
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, when youngsters start loving
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nature
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 they will go on hikes or road trips which will lead to a healthy and active lifestyle.
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,spending more
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 outdoors is important as it will
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 boost confidence and help them to develop interpersonal and communication skills. outdoor exposure is
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 vital for
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children's
children
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 studies
such
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environmental
enviromental
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environmental
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, it is
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indispensable
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indispensable
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children
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 to have exposure
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nature
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. In conclusion,
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the busy
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schedule
shedule
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schedule
 of
children
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 made them
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spend more
time
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indoors
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Nevertheless
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, admiring and exploring
nature
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 is important for
children
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 for both their mental and health
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