In some culture, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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the education, teachers and parents will tell their children that if they work harder, they can reach any goal.

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some pupils,

however

, it may have some negative impact on others. In

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and give my own opinion.

First

of all, for the benefit,

this

educative strategy can motivate youngsters to put more effort into any situation, regardless of what the

result

is. If the outcome is successful, the young generation will become more ambitious and have

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to conquer difficulties in their future.

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, they will not

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their confidence simply.

Therefore

, they can bear adversity and prepare to cope with

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challenge. They will have

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optimistic mind to deal with any problem.

On the other hand

, without any success, some young adults may become pessimistic because they will find out

this

statement is not always the truth. If they can not undergo failure, they may think that

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is meaningless. For those who have

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outcome

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, they might become

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and self-satisfied.

This

characteristic will lead them to a negative cycle when they get into trouble. It will be hard for them to comprehend the reason why they failed. To sum up, it seems that there have both advantages and disadvantages whether the

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the outcome, I think it is significant for adults to tell children not only

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harder during the process but

also

the way they look at the

result

. If the children can look at the positive way, they can put more effort into any difficulties which they will meet in their future life.