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Memorization of information by frequent repetition, namely rote learning, plays a role in many education systems. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays rote learning plays a role in the education system as
students
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 memorise the
information
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 in order to pass the examinations.
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,
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disadvantages
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disavntages
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disadvantages
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, it is common for
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pupils nowadays to pass the examinations by memorising the data.
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 number of
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 to get through exams as some are not very talented in creative and
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, if the
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 he/ she has the ability to pass the exam without any difficulty.
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, rote learning has its own disadvantages. In order to use
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, the pupils will not be able to answer the questions.
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frequently
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repeating
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 will retard the development
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 and analytical thinking of
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, the pupils will only be able to succeed in limited subjects
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 the value of learning
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because
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even though
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 it is clear that the disadvantages of retro learning outweigh the advantages.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • frequent repetition
  • rote learning
  • factual recall
  • foundational knowledge base
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
  • retain and recall information
  • surface learning
  • deep understanding
  • unfamiliar contexts
  • stifle creativity
  • promotes memorization
  • exploration of ideas and concepts
  • disengaged or demotivated
  • tedious and uninteresting
  • enthusiasm for learning
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