Memorization of information by frequent repetition, namely rote learning, plays a role in many education systems. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays rote learning plays a role in the education system as
students
memorise the
information
in order to pass the examinations.
However
,
this
method of learning has both advantages and disadvantages and
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advantages
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outweigh
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disadvantages

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the disavntages

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disavntages
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disadvantages

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Firstly
, it is common for
the
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pupils nowadays to pass the examinations by memorising the data.
This
technique will provide
opportunity
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an opportunity
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to
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large
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number of
students
to get through exams as some are not very talented in creative and
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critical

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crytical
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thinking.
For instance
, if the
students
have the ability to memorise the
information
he/ she has the ability to pass the exam without any difficulty.
On the other hand
, rote learning has its own disadvantages. In order to use
this
technique
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,technique

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the questions of tests should be directly from the text and if there
some
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are some

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ammendments
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amendments

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, the pupils will not be able to answer the questions.
Moreover
,
by
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frequently
repiting
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repeating
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and memorising the
information
will retard the development
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of creative

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and analytical thinking of
students
.
For instance
, the pupils will only be able to succeed in limited subjects
such
as Science and history but they will not be able to do artistic subjects. Memorising
of
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information
will
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loose
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lose

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the value of learning
becasue
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because

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eventhough
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even though

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the
students
passed the exams they will not have general knowledge or the ability to apply theory to a different scenario. To summarise things up, retro learning is a common technique used in the education system nowadays. After a thorough analysis of
this
aspect
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,aspect

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it is clear that the disadvantages of retro learning outweigh the advantages.
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  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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