one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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our lives drastically,

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of well-developed medicine.One of them

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would be considered as a chance to prolong the lifetime.

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progress are stronger than

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. To commence,those improvements in the medical sphere have a ginormous effect on

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and moral condition of people, and thereby on their life quality.

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process of

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improvement not only help to get people's

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easier and better

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but utterly

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them

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chance to live.

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successful heart transplant operations was performed on a nineteen years old guy from Australia with a congenital heart defect.He thought he was doomed and destined to die at

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such

an early age,

nevertheless

,thanks to modern medicine,currently he lives a normal

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,he's been given a

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bringing some challenges to think about.The concern,

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10 years is known as overpopulation.It is very ironic to say that

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medical phenomenon is the greatest achievement of mankind

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to the main cause of the development of the aforementioned problem.A few decades ago,a heart transplant seemed something impossible,

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now it is easily

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humanity is looking for ways to solve the issue of overpopulation and is already taking certain actions.

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there is a

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that says that there must not be more than one child per family. To conclude that advancements outbalance its

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that the community according to the longer living expectancy and improved living conditions will have

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amount of time to find solutions to the issues

such

as overpopulation.