one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?
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affected
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This
essay will explore the reasons why I believe that the advantages of this
progress are stronger than downsides
.
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situation is also
bringing some challenges to think about.The concern,that is
bothering a lot of scientists and politicians for last
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medical phenomenon is the greatest achievement of mankind Correct word choice
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humanity is looking for ways to solve the issue of overpopulation and is already taking certain actions.Correct word choice
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that says that there must not be more than one child per family.
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