one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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our lives drastically,
as a result
of well-developed medicine.One of them
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would be considered as a chance to prolong the lifetime.
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. To commence,those improvements in the medical sphere have a ginormous effect on
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and moral condition of people, and thereby on their life quality.
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process of
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improvement not only help to get people's
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easier and better
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but utterly
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them
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chance to live.
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successful heart transplant operations was performed on a nineteen years old guy from Australia with a congenital heart defect.He thought he was doomed and destined to die at
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such
an early age,
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,thanks to modern medicine,currently he lives a normal
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,he's been given a
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bringing some challenges to think about.The concern,
that is
bothering a lot of scientists and politicians for
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10 years is known as overpopulation.It is very ironic to say that
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to the main cause of the development of the aforementioned problem.A few decades ago,a heart transplant seemed something impossible,
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now it is easily
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,over time,
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humanity is looking for ways to solve the issue of overpopulation and is already taking certain actions.
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there is a
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that says that there must not be more than one child per family. To conclude that advancements outbalance its
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that the community according to the longer living expectancy and improved living conditions will have
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amount of time to find solutions to the issues
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