Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion?

It is argued that discovering a space counts as a very expensive process and

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of that, it is suggested to use

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money

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on more significant things.

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essay agrees with

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statement because it would be better to spend

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money

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on developing environmental aspects, and rebuilding or

renovation

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some education schools and universities. The environment is one of the most important aspects, which should receive a huge amount of

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for its development. The

places

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as green gardens, countryside fields, street parks, and other social areas must obtain government attention. One of the most problematic things is the lack of tree care. What I mean by that,

the

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shortage of looking after the green

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will hugely impact

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ecology.

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, a new green area called Central Park was reconstructed after a long time. Some schools and universities are necessary to be reconstructed and renovated. What I mean by that, nowadays education

places

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have a huge problem with

building

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the building

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, where students take

places

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every day. The rooms are totally destroyed not because of people who work there, it is because of old build construction. To solve

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, it is important

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the government to take care

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of

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renovation or even replacement of the building for

population

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the population

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.

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, the location of a new Cambridge school in Uzbekistan was changed. The main reason was reconstruction. In conclusion, it is known that the importance of exploring space for scientific achievements takes a huge amount of

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,

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in my opinion it is

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preferable to spend

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allocated

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for

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on

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developing an environment and

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reconstructing education areas.