Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion?

It is argued that discovering a space counts as a very expensive process and

instead

of that, it is suggested to use

this

money

on more significant things.

This

essay agrees with

this

statement because it would be better to spend

this

money

on developing environmental aspects, and rebuilding or

renovation

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some education schools and universities. The environment is one of the most important aspects, which should receive a huge amount of

money

for its development. The

places

such

as green gardens, countryside fields, street parks, and other social areas must obtain government attention. One of the most problematic things is the lack of tree care. What I mean by that,

the

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shortage of looking after the green

places

will hugely impact

on

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ecology.

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, a new green area called Central Park was reconstructed after a long time. Some schools and universities are necessary to be reconstructed and renovated. What I mean by that, nowadays education

places

have a huge problem with

building

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the building

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, where students take

places

every day. The rooms are totally destroyed not because of people who work there, it is because of old build construction. To solve

this

, it is important

to

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for

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the government to take care

about

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of

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renovation or even replacement of the building for

population

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the population

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.

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, the location of a new Cambridge school in Uzbekistan was changed. The main reason was reconstruction. In conclusion, it is known that the importance of exploring space for scientific achievements takes a huge amount of

money

,

however

in my opinion it is

more

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preferable to spend

this

allocated

money

for

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on

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developing an environment and

also

reconstructing education areas.