Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places. What are the advantage and disadvantage of using a bicycle these days?
Nowadays, riding a
bicycle
is one of the most popular activities in people
's life. Some people
believe that riding a bicycle
is the best way to travel
to a destination. From my point of view, although
this
transport is more
healthier, it is Change the word
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also
risk accident by car and inconvenient if you travel
a long- way or in an urban area.
On the one hand, there are many advantages to travelling by bicycle
. First
, this
transport provides more
healthier than other Change the word
apply
transports
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transport
Moreover
, riding a bicycle
is friendly to the environment and different from other transports
, Fix the agreement mistake
transport
such
as cars and trains, which produce pollution in the air and able to harm the environment. Today, many
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for many
people
who like to travel
and do not want to harm the environment, bicycle
will be the Add an article
the bicycle
a bicycle
first
option to choose for travelling.
On the other hand
, nowadays, many people
think that riding a bicycle
provides a lot
disadvantages. Today, the Add the preposition
oflot
bicycle
is considered by people
that
is
Change the verb form
are
inconvenient
transport system. The reason for that, if we want to Correct article usage
an inconvenient
travel
in the urban city, the bicycle
is not suitable for a place like that and its is very risky if we travel
in city
, for in the urban city there are a lot of cars, Add an article
the city
a city
thus
maybe it can be accident happen inroads.
To conclude, nowadays, the bicycle
is not suitable in a place which have
a lot of cars and modern area. Change the verb form
has
However
, if you want to make your body healthier, the bicycle
is able to provide that condition.Submitted by napoldej.p on
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