Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places. What are the advantage and disadvantage of using a bicycle these days?

Nowadays, riding a
bicycle
is one of the most popular activities in
people
's life. Some
people
believe that riding a
bicycle
is the best way to
travel
to a destination. From my point of view,
although
this
transport is
more
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healthier, it is
also
risk accident by car and inconvenient if you
travel
a long- way or in an urban area. On the one hand, there are many advantages to travelling by
bicycle
.
First
,
this
transport provides
more
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healthier than other
transports
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transport

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.
Moreover
, riding a
bicycle
is friendly to the environment and different from other
transports
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transport

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,
such
as cars and trains, which produce pollution in the air and able to harm the environment. Today,
many
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for many

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people
who like to
travel
and do not want to harm the environment,
bicycle
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the bicycle
a bicycle

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will be the
first
option to choose for travelling.
On the other hand
, nowadays, many
people
think that riding a
bicycle
provides a
lot
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oflot

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disadvantages. Today, the
bicycle
is considered by
people
that
is
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are

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inconvenient
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an inconvenient

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transport system. The reason for that, if we want to
travel
in the urban city, the
bicycle
is not suitable for a place like that and its is very risky if we
travel
in
city
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the city
a city

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, for in the urban city there are a lot of cars,
thus
maybe it can be accident happen inroads. To conclude, nowadays, the
bicycle
is not suitable in a place which
have
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has

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a lot of cars and modern area.
However
, if you want to make your body healthier, the
bicycle
is able to provide that condition.
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