The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country's development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The government collects taxes from people and uses
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money in different ways like country development and a better lifestyle. If I talk about education, all subjects are important, not only science, that's why I completely disagree with
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statement. The reason is discussed in the
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para. In
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modern era folk ,gate money technology and they make easy communication and facility from using the internet. ,
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it is an expensive field to study and make something interesting but it is not enough for a country's progress.
However
, Another topic is key factors like history,nature,and more. Administración needs to spend funds on all the fields and subjects.
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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