You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • explain why you have moved • describe the new house • invite your friend to come and visit

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Hope your life is going smoothly as it was before. I wrote

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letter just to inform you that I moved to a new city because I am facing many issues with my neighbours . and there is no backyard in the

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so I decided to shift to some other place where the society and locality should be pretty good enough for me. So the

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which is owned now is in a hilly area surrounded by beautiful hills and greenery. Basically, it is a three-bedroom

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with a large backyard. And the entrance area is so attractive and one more thing after hearing you

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get impressed, every room has a balcony with a swimming pool facing outside of my master bedroom. The

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is fully furnished with all the luxuries

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coming weekend I like to invite you to my home as we are having to get to gather with all my friends.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

156 words

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • explain why you have moved • describe the new house • invite your friend to come and visit

The Greeting

Some people think robots are very important to humans' future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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