You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • explain why you have moved • describe the new house • invite your friend to come and visit

Hope your life is going smoothly as it was before. I wrote

this

letter just to inform you that I moved to a new city because I am facing many issues with my neighbours . and there is no backyard in the

house

so I decided to shift to some other place where the society and locality should be pretty good enough for me. So the

house

which is owned now is in a hilly area surrounded by beautiful hills and greenery. Basically, it is a three-bedroom

house

with a large backyard. And the entrance area is so attractive and one more thing after hearing you

also

get impressed, every room has a balcony with a swimming pool facing outside of my master bedroom. The

house

is fully furnished with all the luxuries

This

coming weekend I like to invite you to my home as we are having to get to gather with all my friends.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

156 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • explain why you have moved • describe the new house • invite your friend to come and visit

The Greeting

Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.

Music has been and will continue to be the universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Public celebrations (such as national days, festivals etc) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?