Some people think that using traditions as attractions for money-making will destroy our culture, but others think that there is nothing wrong with attracting tourists that way. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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hold a view that the government's use of

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-making attractions aimed at

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contributes to the destruction of others, believing it is a way to save

traditions

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. In

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state my position. On the

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hand, the reason

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state that traditional customs are damaged because of commercialization is that means many

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have changed many old-fashioned places to make them more suitable and convenient for many visitors.

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, to make it comfortable for

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in the process of venturing and visiting some big mountains, they build many suspension cables on the way from the ground to the mountain. Had it not been for misplaying the wild landscapes, it would not have the tradition of historical monuments. On the

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hand, others hold that earning

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from cultural tradition is a solution to save that culture. Because the government will have expenditure for keeping many historic monuments.

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, the

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pay

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for visiting many tourist attractions, and those fees will be spent on keeping and repairing cultural

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. A good example of it is Cu Chi Tunnels, the visitors spend

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for buying tickets to visit inside, and that fee is a tool for the government to repair the tunnels.

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that, Dong Ho folk painting still exists to

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day because of the

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from selling their paintings to the

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who visit Dong Ho village. Without

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,

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will not have the financial resources to maintain

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traditions

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. To conclude, some argue that using tradition as a

money

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-making attraction has a part to destroy it. Meanwhile, others believe in preserving cultural

traditions

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. In my opinion, I concur with the latter notion.