peoples's lives are now surrounded by advertisements. These advertisements have negative impact on people's lives.To what extend you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, adverts can be found everywhere. It cannot be denied that
this marketing ways
not only giving Change the determiner
these marketing ways
positive
effect but Correct article usage
a positive
also
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some drawbacks. I personally agree that Wrong verb form
causes
the
advertisements have negative impacts on Correct article usage
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peoples’
lives. Change noun form
people’s
This
manuscript will elaborate first
on the function of advertising a product
and second
, I want to highlight demerits
of it on society.
One of the effective ways of increasing sales target is through advertisements. By advertising, Correct article usage
the demerits
people
will be familiar with a new product
,
and have Remove the comma
apply
a
trust Remove the article
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on
it as well. The raised issue is the method Change preposition
in
of
the marketers Change preposition
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promote
their Wrong verb form
promoting
product
massively. Fix the agreement mistake
products
Therefore
, none of people
can avoid them. Add an article
the people
For instance
, people
will always see and listen to commercial
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commercials
through
television, radio, and the internet as well which unconsciously drives society to purchase more than they need. Change preposition
on
Therefore
, huge ads make people
become consumptive.
The
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Consumptive
consumptive
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Consumption
behaviour
leads Change preposition
of behaviour
people
spend
their money Add the particle
to spend
for
something they do not require on the daily a daily basis. They cannot separate the priority between the primary and secondary necessities. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, the negative side effect of ads is to rise
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raise
the
number of trashes from industrial and Change preposition
in the
consume
process which Replace the word
consumption
affect
the environment. Change the verb form
affects
For example
, my friend is a shopaholic. Every time she sees a new food product
commercial, she directly orders and tastes it. Whether she like
or Change the verb form
likes
dislikes
, she keeps buying it. That food package causes more waste which Correct pronoun usage
itdislikes
hard
to Add a missing verb
is hard
be
recycled. Change the verb form
is
Thus
, the disadvantages of advertisement push the community to be lavish and caused the
environmental damage.
To summarise, I personally argue that advertisements Correct article usage
apply
is
one of the quickest ways to introduce a new Change the verb form
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product or
productor
brand in a market. Correct your spelling
product
Nevertheless
, it also
creates problems for human habits. It does not only build consumptive behaviour but also
produce
more rubbish which can destroy Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
the
nature.Correct article usage
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